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Paraphrasing the IELTS Question Without Changing Its Meaning

Almost every candidate has been told to paraphrase the question in the first sentence. Far fewer have been told what happens when the paraphrase goes wrong.

Two things are true at once here. Copying the prompt word for word earns you nothing, because copied words are not counted as your language. But a paraphrase that changes the meaning of the question is worse than copying, because it can move your whole essay off the task.

This post shows the transformations that are safe, the ones that are risky, and how to tell them apart in the fifteen seconds you have.

Why copying earns nothing

Task Response is the criterion that asks whether you answered the question that was asked. Lexical Resource is the criterion covering your vocabulary range and how accurately you use it.

Words lifted directly from the question prompt are not your production, so they do not demonstrate range. An introduction built entirely from the prompt is effectively an empty paragraph in scoring terms, even though it fills three lines on the page.

That is the whole argument for paraphrasing. It is not a ritual and it is not a rule handed down by the exam. It is simply that your own words are the only words that can be assessed.

Why a broken paraphrase is worse

Here is a question, and a paraphrase that quietly destroys it.

Original: Some people think that children should begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Paraphrase: Many people believe that young children should study foreign languages. This essay will discuss whether learning languages is beneficial.

Read what happened. The original question is about the timing of language learning, primary school against secondary school. The paraphrase deleted the comparison entirely and replaced it with a general question about whether language learning is good.

A candidate who writes that introduction will now spend two body paragraphs arguing that languages are useful, which is not the question. The essay can be well organised, accurate, and fluent, and it will still be limited on Task Response, because it answered something else.

That is the real risk. Paraphrasing is not a vocabulary exercise. It is a comprehension test that you set for yourself in the first thirty seconds of the exam.

The three parts of a question, and which ones you may change

Every Task 2 prompt has three parts. Treating them separately is what makes this safe.

PartExampleCan you change it
The topic statementchildren should begin learning a foreign language at primary schoolYes, rewrite freely
The key termsforeign language, primary schoolCarefully, or keep them
The instructionDo the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?Never change the meaning

The instruction is the part that decides what your essay must do. Whether it asks you to discuss both views, to say how far you agree, to give causes and solutions, or to weigh advantages against disadvantages, that requirement is fixed. You may rephrase it, but the task it sets must survive.

Key terms are the technical nouns the question is built on. Some have no safe synonym. If the question is about "renewable energy", writing "green power" is acceptable, but writing "electricity" is not, because it is a different and much wider thing.

When a key term has no accurate synonym, keep it. Repeating one necessary noun from the prompt is not penalised in any meaningful way. Replacing it with a word that means something else can cost you a band.

Five safe transformations

These change the words without touching the meaning. You can practise each one in isolation.

1. Change the word class. Turn a verb into a noun, or an adjective into a noun.

Governments should invest in public transport.
Government investment in public transport is often proposed.

2. Change the voice. Active becomes passive, or the reverse.

Companies pollute rivers.
Rivers are polluted by industry.

3. Change the order of the clauses. Put the second half first.

Although cars are convenient, they cause congestion.
Cars cause congestion, despite the convenience they offer.

4. Replace only the words you are certain about. Common, low risk swaps: children becomes young people, should becomes ought to, many people think becomes it is widely argued, important becomes significant.

5. Attribute the opinion. Turn the flat statement into a reported view, which is natural academic style and adds a verb structure.

Some people think that museums should be free.
It is sometimes argued that access to museums should carry no charge.

Any two of these five, applied together, produce a genuine paraphrase. You do not need all of them, and you do not need to change every word.

A worked example, start to finish

Original question: In many countries, the amount of crime committed by teenagers is increasing. What are the causes of this, and what solutions can you suggest?

Step one, identify the parts. Topic statement: crime by teenagers is rising in many countries. Key terms: crime, teenagers. Instruction: causes and solutions.

Step two, choose transformations. Word class, plus attribution, plus a clause reorder.

Paraphrase: Youth offending is reported to be rising across a number of countries. This essay will consider why this is happening and what might realistically be done about it.

Check it against the original. Youth offending is an accurate rewrite of crime committed by teenagers. "Across a number of countries" preserves "in many countries" rather than claiming it is universal. Causes and solutions are both still there, in that order.

Now here is the same question paraphrased badly, so you can see the difference side by side.

Weak paraphrase: Nowadays, crime is a big problem in society. This essay will discuss the reasons and give some solutions.

Teenagers have disappeared. The essay will now be about crime in general, and every paragraph about adult crime is a paragraph that does not answer the question.

The check that takes five seconds

After you write your first sentence, read the original question once more and ask two questions.

  1. Is every key term in my sentence still true to the original, or have I widened it?
  2. Does my sentence still set the same task the instruction sets?

If either answer is no, fix it before you write anything else. A wrong first sentence usually produces a wrong essay, because the rest of the answer follows the introduction rather than the prompt.

One more habit worth building: do not spend more than about a minute on the paraphrase. It is one sentence out of roughly fifteen. Candidates who polish it for four minutes are taking that time from the body paragraphs, which is where Task Response is actually won.

What to do today

Find ten Task 2 questions. Do not write essays. Write only the paraphrased first sentence for each, with a one minute timer.

Then go back through all ten and underline every key term in the original. Check that each one is still present and still accurate in your version. You will probably find two or three where you widened the meaning without noticing, and noticing is the entire skill.

When you write a full answer, Bandly gives an estimated band for each of the four criteria with the reasoning shown, so you can see whether your introduction is reading as an answer to the question that was asked. The bands are model generated estimates rather than an examiner's judgement, so use them to decide where to put your practice time.

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